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Content | 4 | Content is relevant to the task and the target reader would be informed but content element 2 is not entirely clear. |
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Communicative Achievement |
3 | The email is written in an appropriate register, holds the reader's attention and generally communicates straightforward ideas (A detailed plan should be made.). |
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Organisation | 3 | The text is coherent, with content addressed in a logical order, | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
Language | 3 | Uses some complex grammatical forms with control (money would be used to buy new office equipment) but other sentences are less successful (Certain people should be pointed to check) and (The money that spend on our company's courier services...) , Errors do not impede communication. |
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Content | 1 | A number of irrelevances are present (regarded the time when given for a useless things) , and content element 3 is not adequately addressed. The target reader would be minimally informed. |
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Communicative Achievement |
1 | Uses email conventions to communicate ideas in a generally appropriate way, although lacks concision. |
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Organisation | 2 | The email is connected despite a very long first sentence and uses some cohesive devices (as; and; for instance) . |
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Language | 1 | Uses everyday vocabulary and simple grammatical forms (we have to; Every one who wants to...must...) . Errors are noticeable and at times impede communication (buying everything useless on holidays) although generally meaning can still be determined. |
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Content | 5 | All content is relevant and the points are expanded where appropriate so that the target reader is fully informed. |
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Communicative Achievement |
5 | Uses the conventions of a report effectively to hold the target reader's attention (The purpose of this report; In conclusion) . The report communicates straightforward and complex ideas clearly and the register is appropriately formal. |
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Organisation | 4 | Uses a variety of features which organise the ideas well (because; Concerning; Regarding; The reason is: this would) . |
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Language | 4 | A range of less common vocabulary and some complex structures is used (This should be no longer the case; we have to improve our diversification; we are on track) . Errors are present (70% of our customer; rapidely; in the same time) but these do not impede communication. |
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Content | 2 | Content element 1 is not entirely clear (new training for staff should be carried out). Content element 2 lacks expansion on what type of product (we should increase our category of goods) and prelong hours in content element 3 is unclear. The target reader would be partially informed. |
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Communicative Achievement |
3 | Report writing conventions are generally used appropriately (The aim of this report; According to the survey) . Register is sometimes inconsistent (That's my analyzis) . |
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Organisation | 3 | Generally well-organised with some suitable linking (In addition) and use of pronouns to avoid repetition (we/us for the company and them for the customers) . |
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Language | 2 | Uses a range of simple and complex forms. Errors are noticeable (thought bad of our staff; there was not large range of goods; prelong) but meaning can still be determined. |