WRITING1.
学校应不应该干涉大学生谈恋爱?
Read carefully the following two excerpts on the romantic relationship on campus, and then write your response in NO LESS THAN 300 WORDS, in which you should: 1. summarize the main message of the two excerpts, and then
2. express your opinion towards these arguments, especially your opinion on the relationship.
You can support yourself with information from the excerpts.
Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks. Excerpt 1 The Pure Love on Campus
The increasing number of college students devoting their time and energy to romantic relationships has caught the attention of many parents and teachers. Different opinions are held by different people. From the perspective of college students, falling in love with someone can be one of the most important memories in their college period. It is natural for young people to have a crush on someone and also they have the right to pursue love in their life.
The undeniable fact is that college students today are mostly born after the millennium. They possess many different values compared with their parents. The social environment has changed a lot in their generation, thus college students today are more open and bold in pursuing love. Besides, college students are already adults. They are legally independent at this time.
As we all know, the unexpected gap. between two generations is influencing their relationship. Whether to refrain from dating someone at college or not is the students' choice to make. Parents and teachers should not lay their fingers on it. College students are supposed to live a life with privacy.
Excerpt 2 Inappropriate Behavior in the Name of Freedom
The number of college couples is increasing. With the idea that one shall be extremely regretful if he fails to have a romantic relationship in college, many college students are so into dating. Although the students' feelings are not controllable by others, many universities have tried various forces to intervene in college love, for the behaviors of these college couples are inappropriate in etiquette.
"You have no idea. Literally everywhere I go, I get to see couples hugging and kissing. I feel like there's no comer for me to sit down and read books quietly. They can see only each other, sparing no room to care about others." Says a college student who claims himself "a pathetic single dog."
Despite the uncivilized behaviors, college students are not actually mature in mind. With limited energy, they are struggling to allocate time reasonably for dating, part-time jobs and other activities. The major task in college should be studying. Besides, most college relationships end in sorrow. Graduation can change one's life tractor a lot. There are many cases that long distance separates true lovers.
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Love Is not to Be Heckled, Behaviors Are
The fierce debate on whether the college should intervene in the romantic relationship is a tricky issue. On the one hand, college students are adults and they have the right to have a date and love someone. They have their own luscious and vivid description of love. Their private life should not be interrupted, while on the other hand, many colleges have their reasons to be the bad ones. The common situation is that many college romances are accompanied with uncivilized behaviors which can disturb the study atmosphere of campus. I think we need to consider the two different opinions. Falling in love on campus is normal and beautiful; the point is the students will not ignore study and not disturb public order.
(Viewpoint)
Surely we cannot look to the students to be tractable horses and finally go on a blind date.
(Topic sentence) Although many parents and teachers have proposed that college students are not mature enough to choose the right one and have a lasting relationship, the students themselves are holding the exact opposite opinions. They believe they have the absolute right to pursue their love and lead a happy life on campus.
On the flip side, college students should harvest the positive energy in their love.
(Topic sentence) First of all, the inappropriate behaviors should be avoided. The campus is the place for all the students, and thus we call it a public place. The romantic relationship should cause no inconvenience to other people. Also, the best result is that college couples are cleaving the water together and promoting each other to be a better person.
In conclusion, the romantic relationships in colleges are definitely available. The colleges should not take them as adverse circumstances for their students. Instead of intervening in the romantic relationships, universities need to put emphasis on moral education for their students.
(Conclusion) [解析] 审题立意
本作文题目为大学应不应该干涉学生的恋爱问题。校园恋情本应纯净、美好,但是校园中频频出现的情侣不雅行为给校园正常、健康的学习环境带来了不良影响。考生可以结合自己的实际生活体会,对此发表看法。
写作框架
1.总结材料中给出的两种现象,学校不应该干涉美好的校园恋爱,另一方面,也不应该对校园中的情侣不雅行为不闻不问。
2.发表自己的观点。你是如何看待校园中的恋情的,以及学校干涉校园恋情是否合适。
3.总结观点,即校园恋情不应该受到学校的干扰,校园中出现的情侣不雅行为归根结底是学生的道德问题,正常的恋爱不应该被干涉,道德问题需要加强重视。
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关于大学生的假期
Read carefully the following two excerpts about college holidays, and then write your response in NO LESS THAN 300 WORDS, in which you should: 1. summarize the main message of the two excerpts. and then
2. express your opinion towards college holidays. especially your opinion on the length of them.
You can support yourself with information from the excerpts.
Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks. Excerpt 1 Recuperation Brings Energy
Although seen as the unexpected guests in the working days, holidays are always welcomed by all the social members, for it provides us with relaxation and rest. The tensions and pressures that we have to bear in the working days are all blown away in holidays.
With the rapid social development, stress has become one of the biggest problems that most people suffer in life. As stress is endangering our life from a large extent, the clamour for mental relaxation is growing higher at the same time. For the young adults in college, having the stereotyped schedule and the fixed model in school for a long time can be a major cause of the mental and physical stress. To reduce the harmful changes stress bring to college students and also to ensure the students have a better status for further study, the schools should give adequate time for the students to enjoy themselves.
Freeing the students from the chains, the holidays are also a great time for them to fulfill their personal interests. They get to do things that are normally restrained by the tense time schedule in school. Personal hobbies and innate potentials are developed during the holidays.
Excerpt 2 Long Holidays Breed Laziness
No query can be given on the absolute right of holidays for college students, yet the holidays might be questioned as too long nowadays. Holidays provide an environment totally different from school. A long separation from the campus may result in the problem of looseness. When the students are accustomed to the holiday pattern, it is usually hard for them to re-enter the classes and studies.
The time assignment of the holidays is not clear for most of the students. Without the proper guidance, holidays are the epitome of binge. From the study aspect, these young adults may run wild in studying without the regular schedule in school. Therefore, the common status of the holidays is usually indolent and vacuous,
The dropout rate is also closely linked with the attachment that students have with their schools. A long time departure from school causes the loss of the sense of belonging which is relatively hard to reestablish. For students, the knowledge acquisition is beyond any other affairs. With no mature mindset, their enthusiasm could be frayed in the long and aimless holidays.
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A Proper Holiday Arrangement Is Needed
Whether college students are having an overlong holiday nowadays has been disputed. Admitting the necessity of holidays, some people are still considering that college students are having more time off than they need. In my opinion, the true argument is not in the length of the holidays but in how college students spend the holiday time. Actually, whether the time is spent under the name of school days or holidays. it should be meaningful and fulfilled.
(Viewpoint)
First of all, holidays are definitely the requisites for college studies.
(Topic sentence) Or to be more accurate, holidays are the requisites for every social member. The holidays free us from the restrained model in school and give us chance to regain identities in a social surrounding which is normally far from us during the school days. That is to say, as college students, social practices like internships are more likely to be accessible to us on holidays.
Secondly, the holiday time can be flexible as long as not impacting the curriculum arrangement.
(Topic sentence) The arrangement of holidays can differ according to the characteristics of different majors. In other words, the length of the holidays is relevant to the practical needs of the major. A long holiday is not necessarily the equivalence of an undisciplined way of life. It can affect the students' development from various aspects in a good way. Thus,it should be arranged scientifically for college students.
The adult influence which includes parents, schools and society has a significant influence on the richness of college students' holiday life.
(Topic sentence) How to help the students spend their holiday time properly would be a question that needs consideration. Yet the basic principle is that under the siege of a positive environment, the students will naturally refuse the mundane or the languishing life during holidays.
Students who have been rapt in their study for a whole semester cherish the valuable holiday time. For these aspirant young adults, the holiday time is not only the brief respite from their work, it is also the chance to improve.
(Conclusion) [解析] 审题立意
假期作为生活中的放松时光一直受到社会关注。假期让我们放松身心,重寻“悠然见南山”之感,对于大学生来讲,更是如此。但是,如今大学假期时间的长短也饱受争议,对于这个问题,大家的见解不同。从学生的角度来讲,假期是一年之中最值得期盼的时光,终于可以摆脱学业负担,做自己喜欢的事情;但是另一方面,过长的假期可能会导致学生的思想状态与学习脱轨,假期内的生活模式与学校的生活模式的差异也使得很多学生开学后难以快速进入学习状态,同时,假期的时光能否有效利用也成了争论要点之一。考生作为大学生,对这个问题最有发言权,可结合自己的经历发表观点。
写作框架
1.总结材料中给出的两方面观点。一方面,假期是学生们养精蓄锐、继续前行的保障另一方面大学生假期时间过长,会导致学生学习受到影响。
2.发表自己的观点。假期的重要性与必要性自然是无须争论的,只是为了避免假期成为无意义的时光,家长、学校与学生自己都应该做出努力。
3.总结观点。假期的有效利用有利于学生们的长期发展,无论假期长短,都应该是一段有意义的时光。
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留学之我见
Read carefully the following two excerpts about studying abroad, and then write your response in NO LESS THAN 300 WORDS, in which you should: 1. summarize the main message of the two excerpts, and then
2. express your opinion towards studying in foreign countries, especially on its influence on the students.
You can support yourself with information from the excerpts.
Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks. Excerpt 1 Be Enlivened by Life Abroad
Whether it's for a short time or a long period, studying abroad can be a very rewarding experience in a person's life. It may be a dream of many young people to fly to another country and have a totally different life. Leading a life abroad means getting in touch with different cultures and environments as well as being open to new things to enhance the acceptance and tolerance ability.
By studying abroad, we have the opportunity to see new natural sceneries and wonders, get in touch with different cultures and customs and also make new friends from all over the world. For most people, studying abroad is a chance to acquire different knowledge of their majors that they may not have been exposed to when they are home. Also, acquiring a new language is definitely an extra benefit of studying abroad.
There is so much to be gained from a foreign study experience. We witness a complete new way of life, face new challenges and open our mind to a whole new world. Such an experience has the power of changing personalities and lives.
Excerpt 2 Adverse Situations for Overseas Students
Studying abroad is exciting, yet life abroad might not always be filled with rainbows and flowers. The environments are different from region to region, not to mention between countries. Some of the differences like the weather and architecture are obvious, while other differences like the cultures are subtle.
Culture shock is the first challenge one might meet while abroad. It is an experience we have when we move to a new cultural environment. The unfamiliar or even totally strange way of life, the changing of social atmosphere, and being far from friends and family are all the causes of culture shock.
Another obstacle for studying abroad is the fees. Although the fees vary from countries and universities, studying abroad can always cost a lot. And the number can be a challenge that breaks the study plan. Finally, assuming that one has smoothly gone through the adaptation and the study period, a reverse culture shock can appear when one gets back to his or her motherland which suggests that it's hard for them to fit in the original environment.
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My Opinion on Studying Abroad
A discussion is always to be had on the issue of studying abroad. The exhilarating experience of studying in a foreign country is attractive to most people. Studying abroad broadens our horizons and even changes our outlooks on life. Yet studying abroad is not without blemish. The cost and the cultural handicap have always dragged the overseas students into a trying situation. After musing upon the issue, I assume that for different people the choice of studying abroad is different.
(Viewpoint)
Personal situations should be taken into account firstly before we decide to study abroad.
(Topic sentence) By personal situations, we mean both the financial condition and the personalities. It's definitely unwise to burden our family with our personal desire to get a graduation certification from a foreign university. We need to consider the balance of cost and revenue. Also, personal characteristics should be considered. The study result wouldn't be satisfied if someone couldn't fit in the foreign life. And this could be caused by many reasons like age, characteristics, etc.
The second opinion I would like to illustrate here is the intention of studying abroad.
(Topic sentence) People who study abroad may have different purposes. Some would really look forward to a fulfilled life in another country which is tense but with expectancy, while others would just follow the trend blindly assuming that they would be more competitive in the future job market only if they got a diploma from abroad. For the latter, things may go contrary to their wishes in the end.
There is no doubt that studying abroad is a great opportunity to improve ourselves, yet it is not the only way. For different people, the meaning of studying abroad differs. The fad of studying abroad and the blind worship of foreign education should not be supported in our society.
(Conclusion) [解析] 审题立意
出国留学者除了得到专业上的提升以外,留学者通过接触国外的社会文化环境,了解国外的民俗风情,能进一步拓宽自己的见识,让自己得到提升。此外,出国的经历也被视作“镀金”的过程,因此受到追捧。然而,出国留学也有其弊端。首先,留学费用较高,非普通家庭所能承受,许多家长不惜倾尽所有,为孩子留学做准备;另一方面,国外的学校也分三六九等;再者,对于留学的人来说,从出国到回国要经历两次文化冲击,也是对适应能力的一个挑战。
写作框架
1.总结材料中给出的两方面观点。一方面,出国留学促进个人发展;另一方面,留学也并非是一个简单的过程,需要考虑很多因素。
2.发表自己的观点。能够拥有一段留学经历是很好的,但是我们也不能盲目跟风“留学热”,要审慎对待。
3.总结观点。“读万卷书,行万里路”,接触新环境与不同文化是个人进步的助力,只是增长见识、加强专业技能并非出国留学独有的优势,我们在保持开放心态的同时也应了解“外国的月亮并不比中国圆”。
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我对大学生创业的看法
Read carefully the following two excerpts on college students starting an enterprise, and then write your response in NO LESS THAN 300 WORDS, in which you should: 1. summarize the main message of the two excerpts, and then
2. express your opinion towards whether college students should attempt to start a business while they are still in school.
You can support yourself with information from the excerpts.
Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks. Excerpt 1 Entrepreneurship in College
The new generation has witnessed the hardship for many of the last generations to make the ends meet due to limited salary. Refusing to follow the footprint of their parents, some college students are trying to be the master of not only their knowledge but also their career life. The idea that students acquire skills in college so that they can get satisfying employment after graduation seems obsolete to some extent nowadays.
For those young people who would like to start their business in college, men like Mark Zuckerberg have set models. The brilliant young man successfully launched Facebook which is a popular network worldwide now. And that has put him on the list of the success. Inspired by numerous successful cases like this, students are more confident in trying innovative subjects in college.
According to the newly-amended regulation by Ministry of Education, college students can also apply for gap years which refer to leaving school for several semesters if they want to start their own business. And when they are ready to return to studies, they have the right to change their majors. The regulation aims to encourage college students to start a business. Considering college students are facing severe competition in job hunting, this regulation is definitely a pressure reducer.
Excerpt 2 The Lack of Capital
Although a startup in college is supported, hesitations still remain among many college students. According to a report by a human resources website, only 3.1 percent of students are willing to start their business after graduation in 2016 which is lower than 6.3 percent in 2015. And the reason can be the high opportunity cost in startups.
Lacking experience, college students have a very limited sense in what they are trying to do. To start a business means investing a relatively large number of capitals, for a successful startup is a system of money, human resources, marketing strategies and management etc. And this capital is the fruit of practical accumulation that we cannot expect a fresh graduate to acquire, not to mention the students in college.
Also, many people consider the startups in college as putting the cart before a horse. It is disordering to students' lives. College students should have spent their time on knowledge acquisition so that they can be well-prepared for their future life while the immature ideas of startups can be time-consuming and risky. And the ultimate confirmatory factor of ruruung a business is the economic benefit which is different from the tenets ofcollege life.
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Harmonize Goals with Conditions
Nowadays, college students starting a business while in school is not uncommon. Besides the study life, these young people have found other ways to flex their muscles. Some people consider the early attempt in school is meaningful since college students should let their innovative ideas boom with the help of policies and organizations. Others hold the opinion that college students are lacking in experience in managing a business and should not do vain attempts. As far as I am concerned, the startups in college should definitely be supported and mentored.
(Viewpoint)
Firstly, the competition in job hunting is fierce nowadays.
(Topic sentence) A good number of college students are not willing to follow the traditional way of making money by working for others to support a steady life any more. Instead, they are trying to discard the fixed career life and struggle for their own ambitions. If a college student can start a business successfully, then he or she will not only solve their personal employment, but also provide more opportunities for other college students.
Secondly, with the development of society, new industries are developing rapidly which are generally dominated by innovative young people,
(Topic sentence) With the outstanding innovative abilities, college graduates become the backbone in fields like information technology, new energy, biology, etc. Therefore, their startups in college can be great motivations to these new industries in our society.
Last but not least, the advice on the feasibility of these college startups should be given.
(Topic sentence) Universities and relevant departments are the buoys that save college students from drowning. Effort and guidance should be given to assist adventurous college students with their startups.
In the foreseeable future, starting a business in college will be a trend and one of the most popular occurrences in our society.
(Conclusion) The entrepreneurship in college shows the wish of making a difference to both individuals and society.
[解析] 审题立意
本作文的题目是大学生是否应该尝试创业。现代社会,很多大学生开始尝试创业项目,在国家和学校政策的帮助下,很多人实现了自己的创业梦想。同时,像脸书创始人扎克伯格这样的成功案例也激励着许多大学生。但是另一方面,尽管创业的举动得到多方的支持,对大学生,尤其是在校大学生来讲,各方面的资本缺乏是一个很大的问题,缺少经验,缺少资源,很多时候甚至不能坚定自己的方向。而且,创业所花费的大量时间与精力本应该用来加强专业知识,提高自我,所以这样一来,许多学生产生了本末倒置的感觉。
写作框架
1.总结两则材料的两种观点,即关于大学生创业的有利方面和不利方面。
2.发表自己的观点。肯定大学生创业的积极意义,指出大学生应该勇于尝试。目前面对严峻的就业形势,部分大学生选择自主创业,既能积累经验又能为社会减轻就业压力;另一方面,学校方面也应该仔细筛选大学生的项目,开展大学生创业培训,帮助他们避免失败的尝试。
3.总结全文,虽然大学生的创业精神值得鼓励,但是大学生应平衡创业和专业课学习,绝对不能厚此薄彼。多多尝试有益无害,不过要尽量考虑周全。
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要不要将自己与他人比较?
Read carefully the following two excerpts about comparing ourselves to others, and then write your response in NO LESS THAN 300 WORDS, in which you should: 1. summarize the main message of the two excerpts, and then
2. express your opinion towards the comparisons between different people, especially your opinion on whether such comparisons are good or bad for your development.
You can support yourself with information from the excerpts.
Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks. Excerpt 1 Break a Narrow Mind by Seeing More
The act of finding out the differences and similarities between two people or two objects is usually called comparison. By viewing ourselves and others, we get to see that the world consists of various people. Therefore, we break our comfort zone and get the clue that the world is not exactly as we thought in mind. Living in a group environment, each and every single human being is learning more about the world by self-improvement as well as by learning from others. Specifically, we enrich our experience and knowledge system by comparison.
Comparisons between different people avoid isolations. One can only improve constantly by knowing what's weak about him or herself. Since we cannot always see ourselves clearly, this process is finished through the comparisons. After comparison, we begin to learn.
Comparison is also acting as a mirror in our life. By comparison, we have complete understanding towards what is right and wrong. We human beings are not supposed to live in a vacuum environment. Interactions and comparisons help us improve. The comparison process is actually a sharing process. We exchange information about each other and therefore acquire new knowledge.
Excerpt 2 The Thief of Joy
Often, the motivation behind comparison is a wish not to fall behind. But the specific life conditions are different from person to person. Therefore, comparison is unfair from the very beginning. Besides, comparison diverts our attention away from our own merits to others' achievement.
Everyone in this world is too unique to be compared to others. No comparing system can finish a proper and complete comparison between different people. The direct results of comparison are either our useless pride or the unnecessary resentment towards others. Yet neither of them can add value or fulfillment to our life.
As Theodore Roosevelt pointed out for the world, "Comparison is the thief of joy." Comparison between each other is one of the most frequent activities in our society and it seems that there are always metrics for us to compare ourselves to others, like the comparison of grades in school,jobs, income, or even the size of houses. Life is never peaceful with the infinite types of comparison with an infinite number of people.
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Seeking the True Nobility
The meaning of comparison between different people has been hotly disputed in our society. Some think that it is legitimate to compare ourselves to others to have a better understanding of ourselves. Others agree that we need to focus on our own life since the nobility lies in being superior to the previous self, as Earnest Hemingway pointed out for us. As far as I am concerned, comparing ourselves to others is optional and comparing with ourselves is optimal.
(Viewpoint)
Firstly, comparing ourselves to other from time to time gives us inspirations in life.
(Topic sentence) No one is perfect and omniscient. By comparison, we see the difference between others and ourselves so that we begin to think and then, we begin to learn. However, we should really pick the right person to compare ourselves to like those who have done great work or have great virtue. Also, do not snort at the comparison results, rather, we compare humbly. Otherwise, negative emotions like envy will be in the womb of time.
Secondly, always try to be a first-rate version of ourselves.
(Topic sentence) Everybody leads a life that is backed by his or her own experiences and talents. We should really pursue greater things in life with all our unique advantages lying squarely in front of us. Therefore, always compare with ourselves and always be better than yesterday.
In all, having a flair for what is right and wrong is always necessary.
(Conclusion) Set clear goals for life so that we do not get confused. The ultimate purpose of comparison is learning and improving but not competing. Therefore, do not be debilitated in a visional ferocious atmosphere of competition. We need to compete less to appreciate more in life.
[解析] 审题立意
要不要将自己与他人进行比较是有关人性的重要论题。有人说:比较使我们知是非、明得失,通过比较,我们知不足,有则改之,无则加勉。所谓知己知彼,百战不殆,只有通过不断的对比和了解,我们才能避免闭门造车。但是同时也有人提出,人生中的比较是永无止境的,一直与他人比较只会令我们迷失自我。人们的境遇各不相同,横向对比既不公平,也无意义。关于比较,考生持有什么样的看法呢?结合材料,表达观点。
写作框架
1.总结材料中给出的两方面观点。一方面,通过对比,我们能更好地了解自己,了解世界;另一方面,比较的背后有人性中固有的虚荣心与嫉妒心,过度关注他人,容易迷失自己的方向。
2.发表自己的观点。为了不闭塞,不自我,我们需要适当地看看别人;但是更重要的是,我们要与自己比较,不要妄自菲薄,更不要好高骛远,这样才能健康成长。
3.总结观点。目光长远者不惆怅,目标明确者不迷茫。我们在生活中要想明白自己想要的是什么,与人比较是为了自己更快的成长,这样我们才不会为无谓的情绪所累。