WRITING1.
我对网络交友的看法
Read carefully the following two excerpts about making friends online, and then write your response in NO LESS THAN 300 WORDS, in which you should: 1. summarize the main message of the two excerpts, and then
2. express your opinion towards making online friends, especially your opinion on whether it is a good way or not.
You can support yourself with information from the excerpts.
Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks. Excerpt 1 The Harvest of Friendship
With the access to the Internet, our life has changed a lot. Despite the many advantages and convenience the Internet has brought to our life, making friends online is a bonus. Overcoming the limit of time and space, online friend-making has expanded our circle of friends. Through certain applications on mobile phones, computers, etc., we get to know people we have never met before. The geographical limitation has been broken through.
One of the characteristics of online衔ends is its accessibility. The amazing experience of sharing thoughts and emotions with someone you don't know has actually reduced the stress of exposure. Without going somewhere or being bogged down in social civilities and activities, we can be who we really are in the Internet world. We don't need to talk with them face to face, which has greatly eliminated the awkwardness in sharing the mirth as well as the sadness with them.
Also, the social competition is fiercer than before, that is to say, making friends in real life settings may easily encounter hardships while the online friendship usually generates no troubles. Thus online friendship is more comfortable.
Excerpt 2 Be Destitute of Trust
Using various chatting applications, we harvest plenty of friendship. Knowing someone from a different culture or race and talking to someone about our troubles without any physical burdens is definitely an amazing experience. Yet things can be tricky here.
The online friendships are full of uncertainties and threatening elements. For instance, we often hear the news lamenting for some innocent young girls. They fell into the meshes of bad people and some even lost their lives. The murderers are their online "friends". Believing they have found the true friends or even their Mr. Right online, these girls were holding no defense towards crimes. The cases give us deep thoughts if making friends online is full of dangerous and thorny problems.
What's more, the Internet has impacted many people. We tend to feel indifferent about our real life. According to a recent report, the users who spend more than 5 hours a week will spend less time with their families. Furthermore, they prefer to spend family time working. The closer distance in the Internet has enlarged the distance in real life. The pattern that the friends online are not trustworthy and the real friends have been ignored can push one to loneliness.
[范文]
Leave No Regret in Making Friends
With the increasingly rapid development of technology, the Internet has become an integral part of our life. Among all the things we do with the Internet, making friends is a very delightful one. Friends are the people who extricate us from being helpless and from getting stuck in the mire. However, making friends online has aroused hot debate. Some people hold the idea that making friends online can provide an emotional sanctuary for us, which means we talk to each other with less pressure and our friends online outnumbers the real friends. On the other hand, the opposite voices are heard. Proposing the Internet is full of uncertainty and unknown information, a lot of people are worrying about the safety problems of making friends online. The miseries of these young girls have shown that the worry is not redundant. I believe making friends is necessary and we shall be regretful if we banish online friends for fear of its potential unstable elements.
(Viewpoint)
On the one hand, making friends online can break down the boundaries in friendship.
(Topic sentence) Without the limitation of time and space, our friends online may be from every corner of the world. Sometimes we just want to shun the real society due to stress, strained relations with colleagues or simply a bad mood. At this time, friends online are the best. We share both sadness and happiness with them.
On the other hand, making friends online does pose a risk.
(Topic sentence) After all, we don't know each other. But there are always methods to avoid the danger. The practical ones can be the narrowing of scale. For instance, let's say we really want to meet our online friends and see if we can turn this one a real friend. Then carrying a company is a good choice. You may call your friends to go with you. As far as I am concerned, the uncertain elements were substantial at the beginning of using the Internet. We cannot simply ascribe it to the online friends. What needs to be worried is personal consciousness.
In conclusion, the friendships are of great significance in our life. Online friends are friends, too. We shouldn't shut the door of friendship because of these worries.
(Conclusion) [解析] 审题立意
随着互联网的普及,网络交友逐渐成为一种趋势,尤其在年轻人当中更为明显。作为一种新的交友方式,网络交友一直备受争议。一方面,许多人提出,网络交友超越了时间与空间,让我们收获更多的友情;另一方面,许多人提出网络交友充斥着不信任感,而且有着太多的不确定性。考生在阅读两则材料后,可以结合自己的网络交友情况,针对友情、针对网络交友安全等方面进行论述。
写作框架
1.总结材料中给出的关于网络交友的利与弊的两种观点。
2.发表自己的观点。观点应该客观地论述网络交友的正反两面,提出网络交友并非洪水猛兽,不应该因为惧怕潜在的危险而放弃很多朋友。
3.总结观点。在网络交友的过程中,我们应该谨慎一些,尽量避免那些不稳定的因素。
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天赋vs.选择
Read carefully the following two excerpts about talents and choices, and then write your response in NO LESS THAN 300 WORDS, in which you should: 1. summarize the main message of the two excerpts, and then
2. express your opinion towards gifts and choices, especially their influence on our life.
You can support yourself with information from the excerpts.
Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks. Excerpt 1 Wrong Direction Leads Us Nowhere
Arthur Schopenhauer, a German philosopher once said, "Talent hits a target no one else can hit; Genius hits a target no one else can see." Although the great philosopher is always the spokesman for philosophical pessimism, the opinion on talents makes sense in our life. Thousands of eggs may give the world a good painter, but not a Leonardo da Vinci in the history of art without a painting gift. Believe it or not, it is talent that decides our directions and achievements in life.
To be successful in a field, we need to know if we are suitable for this field or not firstly. Everyone has his or her own value and potential. Only by finding out what we are good at can we take a right path. Gifts are significant in our life, for they make everything worthwhile and reasonable.
Knowing that setting a right direction in life is prior to the following effort, a growing number of people try to consider their abilities and talents in advance. Also, the consciousness of knowing their kids before they give any forms of education or trainings to them is also increasing among parents.
Excerpt 2 Get Busy with the Controllable Part
Choices are always important in our life. For thousands of years, the story of Fang Zhongyong who was a talented kid endowed with the amazing gift of writing poems, but finally withered away due to the absence of education has been popular in China. Usually the story is told to highlight the eternal question for kids: To learn, or not to learn. Our talent is a present; that's why it is called a gift. But eventually it's our choice to decide whether we open the gift or not.
A gift is what we were born with and it is a case without us sitting in the jury, while choices are what we live with and they are the melody hummed by us. Or in other words, a gift is not one of the choices that we can make, but choices are all decided by us.
A man's life is in fact the reflection of all the choices that he has made. The question of "who am I" can never be simply answered according to our configuration; rather, the answer is mostly showed in what we choose or refuse to do in life.
[范文]
Nature and Nurture
Everyone is born with some innate characteristics that distinguish him or her from the crowd and that are what we mean by talent. In our life, we are consistently reshaping our characteristics by the choices we make. Therefore, talents can be seen as our nature and choices are actually the nurture part. Some people think a gift is the deciding part in our life, for it determines what we are capable of. Others hold the idea that life consists of a series of choices. As far as I'm concerned, gifts arc important in our life, but they are just needed to be discovered; Choices are more important, for they are needed to be made.
(Viewpoint)
This is perhaps too absolute, but cannot be disproved that a gift is the range of our abilities.
(Topic sentence) In the various attempts in life, we get to know our limitations and advantages gradually, which means that we come to know what we are good at or not so as to avoid the inflated estimate of our abilities. And by sketching a clear picture of ourselves, we can get our bearings in life.
However, solely focusing on talent is too pessimistic and we should be aware that we are who we choose to be.
(Topic sentence) Even though we can't totally abandon the way we were born with, we can always choose to make strenuous efforts to get what we want. And we shall try our best to leave no regret in life.
If life can be described as a dish, then I assume talents are the cooking materials and choices are the cooking ways. And whether the dish can have an aftertaste that lingers is decided by the two elements together, isn't it?
(Conclusion) [解析] 审题立意
尽管强调天赋多多少少有些“宿命论”的意味,但是天赋的力量在人的一生中很重要。在很大程度上,我们这些与生俱来的潜能决定了我们人生的道路和人生中能够取得的成就。只有清晰的自我认知和发掘潜力才能帮助我们获得成功。不过,天赋如何我们无法决定,生活中的选择才是我们能控制的部分。在人生的道路上,能否做出正确的选择对于命运往往起着转折性的作用。考生可以根据自己的人生经历,针对天赋与选择的力量,发表自己的看法。
写作框架
1.总结材料中给出的两种观点,对天赋的力量和选择的重要性进行总结。
2.发表自己的观点。天赋和选择对于个人的发展来讲都是至关重要的。不过,那些与生俱来的因素非人力所能掌控,不如修炼提升个人能力,以期在生活中做出明智的选择。
3.总结观点。每一个人的成功都是多种原因共同作用的结果,我们应该在不断了解自己的基础上,保持努力,保持清醒的头脑。
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网络教学之我见
Read carefully the following two excerpts on online teaching, and then write your response in NO LESS THAN 300 WORDS, in which you should: 1. summarize the main message of the two excerpts. and then
2. express your opinion towards the new education approach, especially your opinion on the relationship between school education and online courses.
You can support yourself with information from the excerpts.
Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks. Excerpt 1 Online Teaching Is Flexible
With the access of Internet, online courses have become a trendy way to learn. The new form of teaching is getting more and more popular, for it provides the convenience of having lectures and courses whenever and wherever we want.
Breaking through the limits of time and space, online teaching also balances educational resources. By studying online, students are free to choose the teachers they like which can greatly motivate their interest in studying. Thus, the spirit of self-study is cultivated and the consciousness of choosing a suitable learning style is formed. What's attractive about online courses can also include its ideal model of learning. With the help of the infinite knowledge storage, we can do an instant online search when we are puzzled. Normally in school, the teachers may spare no time for us to figure out what we don't understand, for they have to take care of all the students, or at least the majority of the class.
Online courses are available for both students and citizens. For the working class, taking online courses is a wonderful choice. The online courses are flexible. No matter what your occupation is and when your work ends, you can always have classes after work or in your free time with the abundant online courses available.
Excerpt 2 Face to Face Teaching is More Effective
Although online courses are going viral with the advantages of flexibility and convenience, traditional school education is more influential on students' learning and personalities. School education provides the opportunity for teachers and students to be really intimate with each other, which is quite helpful for teaching and learning.
The school education can proceed without demanding facilities. For the realistic causes and emotional reasons, school education is still the main way for students to acquire knowledge nowadays. Taken in fixed classrooms and dominated by certain teachers, classes in school are more effective. Like the profound role Ms Sullivan played in Helen Keller's life, a teacher's company means a lot to a child. A good teacher can always lift the students' interest with his or her charisma. And the influence is beyond the imparting of knowledge to them.
Despite the above, certain subjects cannot be finished through online courses. If we want to teach a little girl paper folding, it's better to correct the procedures face to face so that you can show where she went wrong. Through online teaching, however, the correction may take several minutes or even longer to be clear.
[范文] Be the Cult of Knowledge
With the development of the Internet, online courses have gained spontaneous growth and enthralled many learners these years. As is commonly acknowledged, online teaching is not limited by time and space. On the pros and cons of online teaching, different people have different opinions. Some admire the flexibility and accessibility of online teaching and propose it is a trendy way in learning, while others stick to the point that traditional school education is more complete and systematic. From my point of view. the using of two methods depends on individual choices, and the cooperation of two types of education may maximize the learning efficiency to zenith.
(Viewpoint) First of all, online teaching provides many learning resources and adjustable class time.
(Topic sentence) The convenience of online courses provides the possibility of lifelong study for all citizens. For people who have already started the occupational life, online courses can solve the dilemma of time management and self-improvement.
On the other hand, however school education is what we call formal education. It can be more effective.
(Topic sentence) Teachers and students are spending more time together and the class time is regular so that every student can settle into a study routine. The bond between the teacher and the students can be a huge power to help students become better people.
From the statement above, we can get the idea that each of the methods has its advantages and the selection depends on the study needs.
(Conclusion) For the students and children, surely the school education should be the staple food and online courses are the desserts, for they may not be ready for a self-reliant study model. For the grownups, online study may be the perfect choice. As college students who are both students and adults, we can try to make the two ways join hands to promote our study.
[解析] 审题立意
网络教学利用互联网和计算机,日益成为一种重要的教学手段。相比于传统的课堂教学,网络教学更加灵活方便,也更能培养学生的自主学习能力。同时,网络教学打破了时空的限制,对于时间比较紧张,尤其是已经工作的人来说,想要进一步学习提升自己,网络学习是一种十分便捷的方式。虽然网络教学有其优势,但是传统的教学所包含的不仅仅是知识的传授,它更饱含着师生之间的良好感情,而对于个人的发展而言,老师对学生的影响是十分深远的。考生可以在阅读两则材料的基础上,结合目前的社会趋势,发表自己对于传统的教学方式和网络教学的见解。
写作框架
1.总结材料中给出的网络教学与传统教学的利弊分析。
2.发表自己的观点。此观点应该是关于目前的学习方式的探讨。观点的灵活性很大。可以从学习主体入手,对于大部分学生来说,在学校接受课堂学习是主要的学习手段,而在课余时间,网络教学是一种辅助手段;对于工作的人来说,可以通过网络教学来进行自我提升。
3.总结观点。随着科技的发展,学习方式会越来越多样。在林林总总的学习方法中,我们要学会选择适合自己的方法。
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我对运气的看法
Read carefully the following two excerpts about luck, and then write your response in NO LESS THAN 300 WORDS, in which you should: 1. summarize the main message of the two excerpts, and then
2. express your opinion towards luck, especially your opinion on the substance of luck.
You can support yourself with information from the excerpts.
Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks. Excerpt 1 Luck Matters in Life
Luck as the presentation of supernatural power is often used to express our blessings to others. Although saying life is closely associated with luck sounds fatalistic, luck does exist. Owning perfect knowledge of odds, we may be able to predict things in life. But no one can calculate luck since it is full of unknown probabilities and because of its randomness, good luck is expected and treasured in life.
The usual advice in life is to trust the power of effort, but not to count on the favor of luck. It is for the reason that effort is controllable in life but luck is not. Surely, success is full of {7eat strategies and hard work. However, the trace of luck can also be seen in it. And that's why we see there are people who make all the right moves yet still are unsuccessful. No one can ever promise success or failure since we know luck is naughty.
The world is a place that's filled with uncertainties. We human beings admit it and prepare for various situations in life. It's not nihilism. Rather, it's an objective recognition of life and a foundation of a better world outlook.
Excerpt 2 Luck is the Humble Expression of the Endeavors
There's no doubt that the focus of luck exists in our life from literally every aspect. The essence of luck has been discussed since ancient times. And the conclusion has been given that luck can be earned and accumulated, for it is the reward of our talents and efforts.
The appearance of luck is the result of the joint actions. A good mindset is the precondition of handling things calmly; a sense of humor is the support when we are knocked down; focus promises our dedication even in tough situations; building a social network helps you thrive in working; learning from others avoids the painful setbacks. All the above is the dispensable elements in success and they all depend on our own effort. Therefore, another definition for luck is the accumulation of hard work.
Actually, those who trust in hard work rather than luck will lead a happier life. They believe that success and happiness can be earned by effort. Although we usually say to others: catch a break, yet the extremely rare breakthroughs can only be caught when we have a solid quantitative foundation.
[范文]
We Cannot Count on Sheer Luck
Ramifications are always there when it comes to the topic of luck. Some believe that as one of the unpredictable elements in life, luck does exist. Others consider luck as the synonym of the constant effort. In my opinion, luck is a hybrid of the uncertain occurrences and a certain amount of effort. And the most intriguing part about luck is we can expect it, but cannot rely on it.
(Viewpoint)
Firstly, the role of luck in our life should not be downplayed.
(Topic sentence) For many miracle moments that we cannot explain in normal sense, there must be some credit that belongs to good luck. And if failure still comes to us after all the struggle we have paid, then maybe bad luck shall be blamed on. Believing in the existence of luck is not hindsight. Rather, it is a fully prepared attitude to face any situations. Also, the belief in luck leads us to be grateful when good things happen and calm when bad things occur.
Secondly, part of luck is still decided by us. That's saying dedications and abilities will always get paid in life.
(Topic sentence) Randomness is not playing an inordinate role in luck. Life is a huge web of causes and effects. We should believe nothing in life is preordained. And the only indisputable thing about luck is never to strip away the stock of efforts in it. What's more, you will still miss the chance that you luckily meet if you are not prepared for it. Just as the saying goes, chance favors those who are prepared.
In all, we should hold a positive view towards luck and make an effort to get some luck.
(Conclusion) As we say, "no pain, no gain". Luck belongs to the hard working people. After all, strong will and endurance are needed in breaking a leg.
[解析] 审题立意
运气的作用一直饱受争议。有人说:“运气在人生中是真实存在的,尽管无法预料,无从追寻,但是运气在我们的人生与成功中扮演着很重要的角色。正确认识这些人生中不可控的因素使我们对待生活更加淡然乐观。”但是针对此话题,也有人认为,运气是能者与努力者的谦辞。好运的诞生必然饱含着前期的努力与积累,是量变达成了质变。考生对于“运气”有什么见解呢?结合材料,发表自己的看法。
写作框架
1.总结材料中给出的两方面观点。一方面,运气是真实存在的,在人生中起着重要的作用。另一方面,所谓运气就是不断努力的结果,是个人能力的积累、厚积薄发的产物。
2.发表自己的观点。个人认为,运气是真实存在的,其组成部分既包括我们无法掌控的偶然因素,也包括我们努力后的必然因素。
3.总结观点。“人生在勤,不索何获。”无法预测偶然,我们就牢牢掌握必然,相信天道酬勤,越努力就会越幸运。
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师生关系
Read carefully the following two excerpts on the relationships between teachers and students, and then write your response in NO LESS THAN 300 WORDS, in which you should: 1. summarize the main message of the two excerpts. and then
2. express your opinion towards the relationships between teachers and students, especially on the ideal relationship in your mind.
You can support yourself with information from the excerpts.
Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks. Excerpt 1 Take Students as Friends
The importance of establishing a harmonious and strong relationship between students and teachers can never be overemphasized. As the two active factors in the process of education, teachers and students have different duties. To complete the education better, great teachers usually focus on the connections with their students rather than the students' compliance.
Education is such an interactive task that it is impossible to fulfill if either side breaks the law of interaction. Therefore, mutual understanding between students and teachers is of great significance. Teaching and learning is a process that go hand in hand with the participants knowing clearly about their requirements. A friendly communication between teachers and students is the precondition of efficient knowledge transmission.
A good education starts from the frank and equal exchange of each other's expectations. If a sense of distance is created because of the ideology barriers in positions, then it is hard for teachers to approach their students. In order to make education fruitful, teachers should play the role of not only a mentor but also a friend and give more proper encouragement and guidance to their students.
Excerpt 2 Stamp the Authority of a Teacher
Surely, the scenery of students and teachers smiling at each other is warm and beautiful, yet the close relationship between teachers and students is not always appropriate in the actual process of education. The ultimate task of a teacher is to bring out the best of the students' ability to master knowledge. A teacher can be friendly to a student, but they cannot be friends.
The identity of a friend is conflicted with the status of a teacher. A teacher must be someone who points out the misdoings of their students and supervises the correction process. People tend to set unrealistic high standards and labels on teachers to make them be friends with their students when no one has ever considered the difficulty in scolding a friend face to face. A teacher's authority is absolutely to be maintained. Even if the relationship between teachers and students should be based on trust and respect, students must treat their teachers seriously.
All students are fond of amicable and knowledgeable teachers. Yet this lovely image of a teacher should not be at the expense of a teacher's authority. Teachers and their students can become true or even best friends after the students' graduation, but not during the period when one side is still under the supervision of the other.
[范文]
A Good Teacher-Student Relationship
In the process of education, teachers are the engineers who need to finish various herculean tasks. Traditionally, teachers are considered as gardeners, whereas today it is harder for them to find a clear role due to the rapid social and economic development. Considering the intricacy of the relationships between teachers and students, different people provide varied suggestions. Some prod teachers into becoming friends with their students so that they can make sincere communication and gain mutual understanding. Others argue that teachers should assert their authority to promise the powerful role in education. In my opinion, teachers and students should establish a sound and proper relationship through mutual respect and understanding.
(Viewpoint)
Firstly, it is necessary for teachers and students to be forthright and friendly to each other. However, the relationship is way different from intimacy.
(Topic sentence) A friendly relationship with students helps a teacher win the trust of students and make his or her teaching easier to be accepted. However, the teacher-student relationship should never be the same as the one between two close friends. The reason is obvious. If a student made a big mistake that had a bad impact, how could the teacher treat him or her like a friend? Needless to say if the student challenged the teacher's authority in public it would not be a good situation. Teachers can communicate with their students the same way as friends do, but the relationship between them should firstly be that between teachers and students.
On the other hand, the construction of authority is not based on impetuous hegemony.
(Topic sentence) A great teacher must be someone who teaches students by his or her actions. The words and deeds of the teacher are like the bricks for building the teacher's image. Therefore, to earn the respect of the students and thus form an education-oriented relationship, teachers should improve themselves all the time.
Education is never an easy job. Though every teacher loves their students, they must love them in a right way. Ideally, a teacher should be both a good mentor and a helpful friend to his or her students. and above all. a teacher should be an instructor who is responsible for their students.
(Conclusion) [解析] 审题立意
师生关系即教师和学生之间的关系。尊师重道、良师益友等都是我们耳熟能详的能够体现师生关系的词语。可以说,和谐的师生关系是提高教育质量不可或缺的要素。现代教育强调教师的主导作用以及学生的主体作用。而在这个过程中,老师到底要扮演一个什么样的角色呢?有人说,师者如友,教育应该是春风化雨般柔和。有人说,师者需威严,这样才能保证教育活动的顺利进行。考生如何看待师生关系,结合两则作文材料发表自己的看法。
写作框架
1.总结材料中给出的两方面观点。一方面,教师要了解学生动态,要乐于并善于以朋友的角度让学生敞开心扉,促使教育达成预期效果。另一方面,教师与学生过于亲密必然导致其权威丧失,无助于教师教育行为的顺利进行。
2.发表自己的观点。师生关系既不能针锋相对,也不能过于亲密。只有掌握好这个度,才能保证教育活动的顺利进行。
3.总结观点。师生关系在教育过程中举足轻重,关系到孩子未来的发展,应着力建立起和谐、融洽的师生关系。